The layout is good and the words do not obscure the cover girl. You need to change the wording though to make it stand out e.g. Autumn is back bigger. Bigger than what, bigger than before, bigger and better, bigger and badder or bigger than ever. For your adjectives maybe look at a thesaurus . You need to get statements so people pick it up in a newsstand
WWW: I like the title of the magazine, it links to music
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The model wore another colour
The layout is good and the words do not obscure the cover girl. You need to change the wording though to make it stand out e.g. Autumn is back bigger. Bigger than what, bigger than before, bigger and better, bigger and badder or bigger than ever. For your adjectives maybe look at a thesaurus . You need to get statements so people pick it up in a newsstand
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